Many people believe that death penalty is necessary to prevent violent crimes, whereas, others disagree
the statement, as they contend that nobody has the rights to kill others. Although, I believe that capital
punishment is obligatory to prevent brutal crimes, still I will discuss about its pros and cons in this essay.
To commence with, let us discuss about the advantages of death sentence. There are many brutal
crimes that are happening in the society like child sexual abuse, rape and murder. Criminals who commit
these cold-blooded crimes are not afraid of the law, as those horrible mistakes would not cost their life.
Hence, they commit these mistakes repeatedly, endangering innocent lives. To end these cruel acts,
governments must reconstitute their laws to sentence death penalty for these crimes. In a recent
horrific incident at Delhi, India, a group of four criminals had brutally gang ranged a 23-year-old woman,
when she was back to her home in a private bus. This terrible incident shook the country and made its
citizens to realize the need for capital punishments.
On the other hand, there are few drawbacks with these judicial murders too. As the society is
completely biased based on power and wealth, there are a lot of chances for the impoverished and
innocent people to get trapped. For example, if any wealthy person commits a mistake, he can bribe the
officers to trap an innocent in his place. Hence, an innocent would be killed, which is completely against
the main guiding principle of the Indian law; ‘Let a hundred guilty be acquitted, but one innocent should
not be convicted’. Thus, the entire judicial system would be questioned. Moreover, the human rights
commission argue that nobody has the rights to kill anyone and even criminals deserve a second chance.
To conclude, although death penalty can cause the life of an innocent, still it can save many from the
hands of these criminals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 75, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'ganged'.
Suggestion: ganged
... a group of four criminals had brutally gang ranged a 23-year-old woman, when she w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, second, so, still, thus, whereas, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55421679532 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9518432651 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20212595212 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596397344634 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495763863089 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546919402746 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061087526031 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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