Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
There is a widely held view among people that death sentence would be imposed on criminals engaging in violence while others are of the opinion that execution is not suitable for the modern society and benevolent properties of human being. I agree with the view that we should carry out lenient yet severe punishment on violent prisoners rather than use this kind of harsh sentence.
On the one hand, it is beneficial to execute the law breakers in terms of finance and specific examples. Firstly, putting prisoners in confinement for a long time is far more money-wasting than giving them a verdict of death penalty. Secondly, a sensational crime, in which a criminal commits to assassination or genocide, should be put under the maximum punishment in order to set an educational illustration for other citizens, from which deters them from engaging in such outrageous delinquency.
On the other hand, I truly believe that we do not have the right to take away anyone’s precious life, the survival right is the ultimate prerogative of mankind. Additionally, we should also take into consideration the extenuating circumstances and miscarriage of justice, which makes people face execution while being wrongfully convicted. To illustrate, there are a significant number of women who have to resort to violence to protect themselves from being sexually abuse, and the self-defence is totally accepted in honor of humanity. Last but not least, we should also pave the way for the criminals, especially juvenile delinquents, to rehabilitate in society compared to ending their lives at such an early stage.
In conclusion, despite some benefits of capital punishments, I think those who are accused of violent crime should be entitled to reintegrate into our community and their relating cases should be carefully reconsidered before official conviction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33220338983 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04768951438 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623728813559 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2895615411 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.3 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144561814708 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503640607664 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396711082073 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872566920943 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307736070058 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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