Capital punishment is often argued as either reasonable or insensible to be put in measure. In this essay, the advantages and disadvantages of the penalty will be discussed and I will conclude by saying whether benefit or drawbacks of greater importance.
In terms of positive aspects, death penalty has its fairness and justice to those offenders. When criminals violate a lucid offence, their consequence is to face the fact of death in the end. The implementation of penalty serves a vital role in maintaining law and order to the public. Another advantage is that it has its deterrent effect to halt anybody from violating crimes in the future. This prevents the innocent who are too weak to be heard in the publicity. The measure tells everyone that when they committed offense, there is always a karma in life. For example, it is in no doubt that a violent criminal to suffer and accept the reality of his punishment to death. There is no excuse or benevolent to those who is indeed brutal to the weak in the society. Many countries, such as US, Saudi Arabia, Africa has established death penalty to measure.
As for the drawbacks of capital punishment, taking revenge is too easily to happen. Since death sentence is considered as harsh and thorny measure in the majority of people, it is seen to be inhumane to make one die. People will keep their discontent Discontent will be rooted deeply into people’s hearts and one day they will slide to revenge. An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth, they want others to have retribution due to their anger. Furthermore, the punishment is not given a chance of rehabilitation for criminals who can never learn from their deeds.
In summary, although death penalty can bring pros and cons, I believe that the drawbacks are of more vital than the benefits. As incarceration is only repeating the crime of killing which leads to more revenge, it should be halted to prevent further death from happening.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: discontent
...to make one die. People will keep their discontent Discontent will be rooted deeply into people'...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, as for, for example, in summary, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84272997033 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76630446022 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554896142433 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1330691628 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28556817429 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781510561738 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423038489596 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152415087635 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574488039065 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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