Some people are beieve that family members os important than friends.Do you agree or disagree?
In fact family play vital role in human being life also,for animals.The member of family is influnce on each other.Few masses are think that the tribe is necessary part of life than the colleagues.However,I am fully agree with the statement and I will delve my point of views in my upcomming pharagraphs.
To commence with,there are various perspectives about family.It is first stage of life due to blood relation among parents and children because parents give birth to us.In other words we can say that mother or father learn to us numrous kinds of thinga such as we thought walk,talk.eat and so on from an our domestic life.Moreover,the house members are complete the all requirments to their children for the happiness.Also,they give alot of money while their studying in an institute.
Probing further,parents are well supported for infants.They are always be helpfull in their lifeas well as the older are often motivate to about babies future.Furthrmore,the family person are want to become an educated and capable or VIP person to their teenanger due to the best guidence.Instead of,our mother or father is very carefully for us they always neglect our weakness but they improve the lacks.
To conclude,both are important however in my opinion people should never forget kindness of their foster parents.In my an experince,nowadays yongsters are doing evil behavior with elder bodies they do not give respect to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21645021645 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38173661025 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65367965368 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.1554888939 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 301.25 106.682146367 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.75 20.7667163134 278% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.25 7.06120827912 414% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978115724609 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637501699906 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475688797088 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637501699906 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475688797088 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 50.2224549098 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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