Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught in schools but other disagree and believe that it is only wastage of time.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought by large number of people that culinary skill should be taught in schools,because it is a necessity part of life. whereas, others hold opposing views and opine that it should not mandatory because the time is wasted by doing this skill.However,In my opinion,it plays substantial role in every human life for domestic chores and I will substantiate both perspectives in the upcoming paragraphs before reaching a relevant conclusion.
On the one hand,there is one of the paramount view is that it is vital for student's future career.As if,pupils learn about this ability from their teachers in school,some can make an interest in this skill.They can become best cook in their further life.As a result,cooking would be a lucrative profession for students.They can achieve success and makes bright their entire life.For instance, there had been got a prize by Indian girl who is one of the most famous in her cooking occupation skill which she had had to from their school.
On the other hand,studying of cooking is not only wastage of time but also,waste of money.There is need of new mentors for cooking study and government have to pay an extra salary them.As a result,regime have to provide cooking tools,materials and the ingredients in each school.Which will lead many problems for students fees structure.For example,cooking studies is available in some schools,but student have to face many difficulties owing to higher extra fee.
To conclude,although,cuisine skill is beneficial for learner's next life goal which they can archive easily,yet,it is not good for some people who can not afford it due to their financial situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22932330827 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3728090545 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.299189888 49.4020404114 312% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 278.2 106.682146367 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.2 20.7667163134 256% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.8 7.06120827912 309% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236250978966 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12931297846 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439761331639 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132221705749 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576227988116 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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