which way of learning is better learning in a class group or self study Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Essay topics:

which way of learning is better learning in a class,group or self study.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Education is a life long process to learning and gaining knowledge with variety of techniques to polish the skills.The most better way to learning in a class and self practice these boths have an equal importance.Classroom study is provided by tutors with other students whereas, self practice an independent education of learning.

According to my perception, classroom study and self study have a skin and nail relationship which cannot be separated as classroom study is a crucial part of education which become to students competitive in a school because they compete with their peers during exams which enhance pupil's skills and personality.Apart from this, they participate another sports activities through the schools level competition among friends circle.

Explaining further, self study is also, a good method to learn something because students learn a lesson about responsibility from this technique of learning.when they study own their own, they become more accountable pupils in their life because an academic assignments are prepared by themselves before coming exams an independently. Hence, it is also proving very effective liability for learner's future.

Conclusively, both the ways in education system are very effective which should be learnt by teachers.There should be competition in classroom regularly along with self practice that is able to become liable student during the study.

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Average: 7.8 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, whereas, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6308411215 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16250206924 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.342797091 49.4020404114 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.0 106.682146367 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.8 20.7667163134 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189476518585 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967847398541 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06962977235 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119007578366 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571609564597 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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