Walking is know to be beneficial for health but these days the number of people walking has reduced a lot.what are the reasons for this? What can be done to tackle this problem?
human's health is made much better by walking.However, nowadays, walking has been declined enough by majority of individuals.it has a factor behind this problem as well as remedial action, which I will substantiate in the upcoming paragraphs before reaching to a relevant conclusion.
To commence with first and foremost cause behind reduce of walking is a technology.Undoubtedly, people spend much time on mobiles for sending and receive the information and playing games in computers and cellphones.In this way, they do not play physical activities and face many health problems in their life.For example, it is researched by world health organization that around 50% people suffered from dangerous diseases owing ti lack of walking.consequently, breakthrough of technology is responsible for this biggest hardship.
Moving towards solution to solve this problem with less uses of vehicles.people should walk on foot somewhere near at their house rather than transportion.Not only, it can improve walking among people but also, they can protect from harmful ailments like, knee pain, diabetes, psychopathic etctera.For instance, as an ancient human were not use any mode of transport and they were keep fit and healthy owing to long walk.As a result,an increasing level of human's health is due to walking.
To conclude, although, this problem is deep rooted because of many reasons, yet, it can be fixed by working shoulder to shoulder, because every lock has a key.Depite of health illness, people use to technology.However, walking can improve if one avoid much use of vehicles and technoloy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5685483871 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41754507418 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66935483871 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.031793812 49.4020404114 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 345.25 106.682146367 324% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.0 20.7667163134 299% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.25 7.06120827912 372% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302873703188 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170407197046 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423500409902 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170407197046 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423500409902 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.8 13.0946893788 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 50.2224549098 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.49 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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