Some people think that intelligence is innate while some think that we can improve our knowledge through learning.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Intelligence is the ability to reason.It is the collection of information.wheather few masses believe that qualification is natural skill or other are trsustfull that individuals can get progress their awareness through practice.However,I will describe both sides of perspectives in my upcomming pharagraphs.
To commence with,there are various views about knowledge.First of all,people can learn everything with the help of trainers and they can aquire lot of experience from their study.Moreover,persons can become more talented during the classis.The practice is very important for all humans also it will be helpful for their career.In adition to,the public bodies can gain sufficient education from their friends who are expert.
Probing further, some human beings are to be capable by birth who are give much information from their older or parents.Like most of communities are prefer to their family occupation because they have already expert in that field. Therefore they have do not need for training.For instance,the gitazz bindrkahiya has followed his father passion.His father was very famous reowned punjabi singer as well as apple of one's eye.
In my opinion,the learning stage plays vital.role in every person life.people should teach good habit to their children in the childhood.Which assist to improve their capacity and every infant should learn new things from technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71291866029 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42744075171 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712918660287 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.7053241839 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 238.8 106.682146367 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.8 20.7667163134 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104436218057 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523941900307 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312331008922 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610545204892 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223606920595 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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