Criminal is that person who is crime against
the masses due to any reason.Few persons are
belive that guilty should be live long life in
jail,because of decrese to crime strenght.
Howerver, I am totally agree with the
statement.Also,I will delve my point of views in
my upcoming pharagraphs.
To commence with, there are several views
about criminals.It is better way safe for
women because some girls are not satisfy
from their enemies and she feel
uncomfortable due to their fear but if the bad
persons will live under in strict punishment
then ladies could feel relaxiation in theri life as well
as she will live their life comfortably.For
instance,the rape caese are increasing in these
days with girls.Moreover,Every person will
aware for law if government give strict
punishment to evil persons and they could do
improve their charachter it will be prove helpful
for next genration.
Probing ahed, it is the best way of decline the
terrorist rate.Individual can do it if they want
protect from dangraous person because it is
the
responsibility of community that they can
inform to cop regarding crime then they will do
shift in punishment houses to criminals for
long
time.Furthermore,some masses who are
fearfull in their life like some bodies are go to
other countrie due to fear and they could live
without any affraid in their city or country.
Nextly,there are some disagree views.In fact
life is as a gift which we recive from god only
for one time not again therefore life is vital for
every person though he is good or bad
person.It should be provide freedom to every
person.Instead of their have own dream
accourding to their thinking as well but they
could not fullfill their ambitions if they will
become criminal till long life.
To conclude,it should be done.Today there are
some masses are not undersatandable special
for girls respect and they show bad behaive
with womans therefore it is hazardous
situation for feminine so it should be very
strict.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24096385542 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02114289604 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536144578313 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.249310215 49.4020404114 377% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 290.0 106.682146367 272% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.3333333333 20.7667163134 266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 45.0 4.38176352705 1027% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 74.0 5.01903807615 1474% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146783240789 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896994043745 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464799881348 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.032838210198 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456039146311 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.0946893788 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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