Governments should ban dangerous sports. Others think that people should have the freedom to do any sport activity.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The arguments to as whether parents should let their offspring mount their favourite recreational activities have become increasingly prevalent in recent years. While some contend that it is a parental decision, I am of the opinion that children should decide on their exhilarating outdoor activities in their spare time.
On the one hand, children’s safety will be ensured when burying in activities set up by parents. To be more specific, when teenagers immerse themselves in a physically demanding sport, it is almost impossible for them to steer clear of minor injuries. In case of emergency, parental notice is of paramount importance to provide necessary and appropriate first aid. Swimming, for instance, might pose a great threat to those under 12 years old. As a result, the presence and proper guidance of parents might prevent their children from potential underwater risks.
On the other hand, others assert that allowing children to hold an activity that they have a thirst for might be beneficial to their comprehensive development. This is because when children are responsible for organising an outdoor activity, they might learn how to distribute equal tasks among team members. This will form a solid foundation for their management skills, which is vital to their career path in the future. Additionally, mounting an activity at an early age will help students know their passion inside out, contributing to the formation of a dream job. As a result, having an insight into an ideal job will likely pave the way for a brighter future since children tend to ramp up their efforts for achieving that job.
In conclusion, the debate over whether parents should enable their children to organise an exhilarating activity during their free time has been discussed for years. While some argue that it is the parent’s duty, I agree that children should be given the right to organise such that activity owing to their comprehensive development.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20189274448 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8318308195 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586750788644 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1395937194 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107614471261 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422920892611 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415479088822 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783318059338 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384469654972 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.