Some people are born to be leaders, while others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views and give opinion
While some people argue that great leaders are born and not made , others believe that leadership skills are developed over time through training, perception, experience and mentoring. From a personal point of view, good headship is a combination of both natural abilities and persistence practice.
It is reasonable for people to believe that leadership is genetic. In fact, good leaders possess optimism and energy that help them to encourage and motivate others to work together effectively. Barrack Obama has a certain charisma that allows him to inspire passion and energy to people, which serves as an example of this. Furthermore, some studies have also shown that there is a significant difference between a learnt leadership skill and a talent one, meaning that a natural chief can easily gain in-depth understanding in their areas, whilst others would find it really difficult to get to the same point.
However, many people born without natural leadership skills still become good managers. In fact, there are some elements that make some a great leader, such as discipline, resourcefulness and a deep understanding of the organisation. In addition, the credibility of a true leader is built on his self-confidence and mastery of his areas of expertise which only emerge after a great deal of time and experience. Without these qualities, a leader's capability may be questioned, as a result, subordinates would not want to follow a weak leader. For example, even Steve Jobs, a true born leader, had to practice his public speaking many times in order to convince his staff to heed his direction.
In conclusion, with or without innate talent, people can still become great leaders with skills that are polished and perfected through education, training and experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27368421053 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91726804286 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.704179436 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298249249555 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982495785571 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662961644501 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164900160416 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629904943112 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.