Some people believe that all company decisions should be made by managers. Others feel that it is better to include employees when making decisions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is indisputable that companies’ prosperity depends not only on the managers but also on the employees. In general, in most organizations, the managers are played the role of decision-makers in which development or the brand value of the organization. Some people believe that for decision-making the companies should include the workers, while others express dissent on this idea. In the following paragraphs, both views will be discussed and finally, my opinion will be given.
To begin with the managerial conclusion, in the big companies only the higher authorities have the power to recommend any idea. Their experience in various sectors and fields of knowledge is helpful for the company. For example, Toyota is a well-known car manufacturer in the world behind their worldwide spreading, their officials had a huge contribution by taking the decision to spread their products globally. Moreover, when a company faces difficulty to make a profit then administrator decisions can help to turn around the company position and bring revenue. To illustrate, when the company is at a loss then managers can change their marketing strategy so that more people can consume their product. For instance, in Bangladesh, Next Solution Lab was almost closed to close their organization due to the huge loss in the share market but manager’s decisions of different divisions protect them from bankruptcy.
On the other hand, employees are the important parts of the company without being their assistance it is not possible to bring improvement. Nowadays many companies asked their employees to comment when a company takes various decisions. According to the survey of the BBC, most of the successful company takes the opinion of their workers to reach a conclusion. Research shows that this type of procedure helps to motivate the workers and increase productivity.
In conclusion, to sum up all the points above, a company needs both manager and employee, a decision from both sides will enhance the profit. By considering the quality and the other factors I will go with the former statement.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28656716418 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01485739542 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576119402985 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3445098283 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323130877307 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986552869197 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824166173326 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203094976703 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101035902864 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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