Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their won wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, letting children carry out their daily routines by themselves has been one of the controversial discussion between individuals. Some people argue that this issue has led them to just consider their desires. While, others claim that the significance of making plans based on problems around them should not be overlooked. I myself concur to allow them to make choices based on their will.
To commence with, some considerable aspects have been regarded not to allow children make arrangements by themselves. Making them fair-minded can be mentioned as the first significant benefits of this measure. Since, if humans had a permission to consider only their wishes, they would do anything in order to make a profit. As a result, other people may be hurt by others just to earn more money or to expand their business. For example, some individuals as bosses have allocated all their decisions for their requirements, so they have forgotten their employees’ demands. Consequently, even by trying too hard, they will not be able to achieve their goals because of their selfishness.
On the other hand, kids by having the opportunity to do their duties based on their knowledge have gained some advantages. Not only have they believed in themselves, but also they have been able to comprehend many subjects. For instance, some understandings could not be distinguished by obtaining pieces of advice, they have required to experience them. Moreover, even though they may make mistakes, they will be able to recognize both their weaknesses and ways to solve them. Also, this action has propelled students to be prepared for every difficulty which they may encounter with in their up-coming days.
In conclusion, although giving children a permission to do whatever they want on their day to day life has had some drawbacks, it has given them possibilities to not only trust their abilities, but also to be organized for problems. Therefore, according to mentioned topics, I have regarded making decisions by themselves as one important issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed them to just consider their desires. While, others claim that the significance of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19939577039 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9031896502 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549848942598 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.658891418 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.235294118 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245166920173 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916286219778 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477746114796 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167994819592 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049943472874 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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