Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes and entertainment) is like to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is import

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes and entertainment) is like to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them

Discuss both view and give your opinion.

there are some people who contend that letting children choose their own decision, will make them selfish in society. However, others believe some issues should be allowed by children as they seriously affect them. In my opinion, children must decide about some regular things like food and clothes because they benefit in the future.

On the one hand, some people argue making decisions by children is essential for issues which result in them and I agree. Nurturing a well-brought-up children is a complicated burden on parents, therefore they always try their best to the process of upbringing have well prospects when they become a full-grown person. Childhood is a milestone to make them independent, confident, a fighter for future life. therefore, it is vital parents provide a situation where they are free to choose their food, cloth-style and also their favorite entertainments. Besides that, they accept the consequences of their decision easier and will understand how to make a decision better than before. it makes them strong in their future life to make their own decision.

On the one hand, there might be saying that providing a platform for children to choose their own food, clothes, and hobbit will be a consequence in society as they merely fulfill their own wishes. In terms of public duty, every person in society must learn how to consider others' rights. In the other words, if the fabric of society respects the prospects of the whole society, society norms will decline dramatically and society will progress in many aspects. For example, while a person who sacrificed its choice for food from Pizza to a boiled egg, entirely has an outlook about how to allocate the governments budget to bring the suburbs facilities for not being hungry.

In conclusion, although some claim about allowing children to make decision make them selfish, I agree with the view that the decisions by their own make them stronger for future life.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07430340557 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60836602327 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9291959984 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.071428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354239272692 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128630806245 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747491191194 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23083183851 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581655172946 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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