Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Today’s generation shows a great variation from the previous population and it is evident on children who are spoiled by letting them choose what they want in terms of food, clothes, and entertainment that will likely create an individual that only does things for his own benefit. But others oppose, saying that allowing children to decide for themselves is essential especially they themselves are affected. I agree that kids should have the right to decide for themselves but it does not mean that parents should tolerate them.
Decision matters after kids mature. In the first stages of a child’s development, parents must teach them what is right and not. And that includes their choice of everyday matters. Spoiled kids will possibly grow tyrant and become a burden in the society. To prevent this occurrence, discipline must be done in early stages of a child’s development. The stage of deciding will come after reaching an appropriate age.
The ability to decide for themselves can help make better choices in life as the children grow older. They will be able to become independent at a young age. Such advantage is desirable, yet, it will also result negatively on the child’s overall growth as mentioned earlier.
With this said, the probability of gaining a negative outcome is higher when kids decide for themselves due to lack of discipline. Furthermore, a good citizen not only thinks about his own but for the nation as well which means there exist a discipline since our society feeds on laws and regulations.
In conclusion, the age of a child to decide for himself must be considered.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06319702602 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81182965997 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.0699773339 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146835488211 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461652049851 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610259717355 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683109661055 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434173846093 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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