Some people believe that to be a successful at a sport you need natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Undoubtedly, outdoor sport is an essential for humans to keep them healthy and fit. However, a section of society deems that natural talent is crucial for people to become a good and successful sportsman because some masses born with talents. Whilst, others neglect this prospective and said that hard work, practice makes a successful and better player as well. This easy will shed light on both views along with my perception.
The one school of thought believes that people needs natural abilities to be a successful at a sport because a majority of humans born with their talents. In addition to this, these talent help them to make a good player and achieve success in sport fields. Even though, masses think that if an infant will born than their gens of talent will be also born with them as well as these gens assist people to take popularity from audience . For example, Saina Newhall the best badminton player of India famous for her back forward foot stroke which available in her by birth. On the other hand, not any coach trained her for this stroke. It is her natural talent gifted by god. In other words, these gens can show drastic increased in player’s performance as well as reach them to peak at higher levels of success.
The another school of thought said that to become a successful and good player human required a vast amount of practice as well as hard work. Furthermore, it is common said that practice makes a perfect man so that is the reason it is mandatory for players not only do lots of practice but also huge number of hard work to touch the stairs of success. Similarly, if a person does not doing a practice or hard work than they will not eligible to play any match because they fail due to lack of practices. Apart from this, if a human will do a huge practice and hard work than they become able to decline dramatically numbers of failures in their career. For instance, Sachin Tendulkar not only a popular Indian cricket player but also number 1 batsmen of Indian cricket team, doing a great deal of practice in his career days. He regularly expand 8 hours on practice without any gap during 2 years after that he become a successful sportsman.
In my view point, a vast amount of practice and hard work are crucial for a player to win successful in life as if they do a lot of efforts than they have great command over sport and master in these. Beside that, a lots of successful sportsmen do lots of hard work and practice in their periods that is the reason they became gain name and fame in sport fields.
In conclusion, although natural abilities are good to be a successful in sport but hard work as well as practice are more necessary to be achieved popularity among sports.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this talent' or 'these talents'?
Suggestion: this talent; these talents
...ith their talents. In addition to this, these talent help them to make a good player and ach...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... people to take popularity from audience . For example, Saina Newhall the best bad...
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Line 9, column 385, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...uccess. Similarly, if a person does not doing a practice or hard work than they will ...
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Line 9, column 840, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'expands'.
Suggestion: expands
...actice in his career days. He regularly expand 8 hours on practice without any gap dur...
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Line 13, column 215, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...sport and master in these. Beside that, a lots of successful sportsmen do lots of hard...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 489.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61349693252 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40620466876 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466257668712 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8997772823 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.45 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273236692451 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916868169395 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648825844743 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174296515456 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364690874476 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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