some people believe that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, the number of accidents are growing sharply because of many reasons. Hence, some people give opinion that government should rise the smallest legal age for using cars. Personally, I partly agree with that phenomenon.
Beyond question, there are various compelling reasons why state increase the minimum legal age for driving cars. First of all, since young people from 18 to 20 do not have enough mature and knowledge for using car which have high speed, easy to make accident when user lost controlling, over 20 age could have enough awareness for each behavior when they drive the car. For instance , young people tend to drive the to come back home after drinking beer or alcohol without thinking about consequences that they can bring about risk for other people. In that case, middle age people will take a taxi in stead of using the car. In addition, teenager are often manipulated by gangster to do illegal activities like racing car. As a results, it could leads many problem for society and government. For example, government have to spend money for fixing the road or infrastructure.
On the other hands, increasing the minimum legal age for driving not the best way to help government reduce accident. Firstly, growing the awareness of driver by increasing the time for studying law is also a good solution. It help driver understand clearly what they have to avoid when driving. Besides, government should increase the punishment for people who make accident, which help them drive carefully and do not make other mistake. Finally, individuals should use some kind of cutting-aged car such as Tesla, which help people avoid emergency situation and accident.
In conclusion, increasing the minimum legal age for driving could bring many benefits for government and society. However, there are numerous ways to help reduce accident that government should consider.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1986970684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56159366441 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563517915309 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8689820904 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8823529412 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4117647059 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355461208385 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118120451216 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991583294154 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224290253383 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392230338898 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.