People have different views about whether the capital punishment should be brought as a charge of the criminals or not, and which criminals should be offended to death as well. In my opinion, death sentence should not be charged for anyone for the reasons that are mentioned above.
On the one hand, supporters of the capital punishment state that it deters crime, and it is a form of revenge, so it must be used for the serious crimes. Firstly, the fear of the death penalty stops people from committing the most violent offences. In fact, this penalty shows that crimes, such as rape, are not tolerated. Secondly, the cost of imprisonment is avoided and the offender cannot pose a threat to others. To illustrate this, a survey found out that in Saudi Arabia, where this harsh punishment is the rule for the serious crimes of terrorism, homicide, rape, armed robbery and drug trafficking, the percentage of these crimes has decreased since this sentence has been implemented into the country's penal code.
On the other hand, individuals who are against the capital punishment opine that there is the possibility of innocence in many cases, and that this is not a good deterrent at all. Innocent people could be wrongly convicted and executed because of the absence of effective proves. Similarly, many criminals do not hink tthey will be caught, as a result crime rates are not necessarily reduced. By encouraging the revenge, we create a culture of violence without ending up with the solutions we aimed to, like the decrease of crimes. For example, according to a research, there is no credible evidence that the death penalty deters crime more effectively than a prison term.
To sum up, even if there are some who support that capital punishment shoule be allowed for crucial crimes, like the terrorism, in my personal point of view, we have no right to take another human life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: PROVE_PROOF[2]
Message: Did you mean 'proofs' (noun) instead of proves (verb)?
Suggestion: proofs
...ted because of the absence of effective proves. Similarly, many criminals do not hink ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for example, in fact, such as, as a result, in many cases, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90031152648 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59160449426 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573208722741 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7149045255 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324634537873 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101136059263 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873026778776 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193604899626 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750843695197 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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