Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
In the modern era, the crime rate is a major issue in developed countries due to the rising population. Some people deem that death punishment will be taken for serious crimes against the criminal while others think that it is not good. Now, I will discuss both views and my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are a plethora of reasons capital punishment should be allowed in the biggest crime. First and foremost, due to the advancement in individuals lifestyle which helps to increase the criminal cases. Nowadays, due to the development of science and technology, the trend of modernization is rising. For example, the huge count of people live away from their native place due to their study or jobs as well as, they do not have fear to destroy the life of another people due to some personal reasons and other issues even, sometimes they do a serious crime which against towards the society such as rape, kill the person and many others then, it is necessary for the government to give a hard punishment for those people who did a crime.
On the other hand, some masses ponder that capital punishment is not a good way to feel the mistake of the offender. They think that many other hard punishments will be announced by the judge in the court against the criminal. For instance, according to the law, the authority gives punishment to the criminal on the basis of their criminal cases such as they allow the police to arrest the criminals etcetera.
According to my opinion, the authority should give capital punishment for those people who destroy the life of others because, if the judge in the court will take such type of steps against the criminals then other masses think before do any crime in their future as well as, hard punishment also, put the fear in others folks mind.
In conclusion, death punishment is essential for those people who did crime which alerts the other masses and it is necessary for the authorities to take a serious issue of criminal cases and announce the hard punishment against the criminals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'criminals'' or 'criminal's'?
Suggestion: criminals'; criminal's
... as they allow the police to arrest the criminals etcetera. According to my opinion, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78591549296 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49966631378 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453521126761 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.090882543 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.583333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5833333333 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338873716951 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139357092177 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12421444442 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211134486448 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307837928207 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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