Some people believe that companies should pay for the damage they cause to the environment, while others say that the government should be responsible for such expenses.
Some companies are playing an important role in our environment. The industrious companies make a huge amount of environmental pollution. The companies are making a dusty or noisy environment in our society. So that the pollution rapidly growing up & the temperature of the earth. On the other hand, the government also not concerned about it. So it’s growing up day by day.
While someone or a company make any industrial work or any other kind of work which make the nature injured, then natural balance are get imbalance. Then the effect is going to all over the world’s people because for the imbalance of nature the natural disaster will happen. Flood, cyclone, earthquake etc will happen for the damage of nature. Nowadays the ice of the north pole is getting melted. The company should recover the environment as well as it was before. On the other hand, the government should look after above these company who make the dusty environment and should collect fine from these company.
If it isn’t done, one day the world will be flooded or become a desert. As a result, world temperature will be high and the low land countries will be sink. As opposed to the greenhouse effect has been growing up. But it is high time to solve this problem. The government should collect fine from these companies which are destroying the environment and also should rule out their licence.
While a company destroy the environment for any other developing article the company should repair that because there is nothing happened for the government. So the companies should pay for these damages.
Some companies are playing an important role in our environment. The industrious companies make a huge amount of environmental pollution. The companies are making a dusty or noisy environment in our society. So that the pollution rapidly growing up & the temperature of the earth. On the other hand, the government also not concerned about it. So it’s growing up day by day.
While someone or a company make any industrial work or any other kind of work which make the nature injured, then natural balance are get imbalance. Then the effect is going to all over the world’s people because for the imbalance of nature the natural disaster will happen. Flood, cyclone, earthquake etc will happen for the damage of nature. Nowadays the ice of the north pole is getting melted. The company should recover the environment as well as it was before. On the other hand, the government should look after above these company who make the dusty environment and should collect fine from these company.
If it isn’t done, one day the world will be flooded or become a desert. As a result, world temperature will be high and the low land countries will be sink. As opposed to the greenhouse effect has been growing up. But it is high time to solve this problem. The government should collect fine from these companies which are destroying the environment and also should rule out their licence.
While a company destroy the environment for any other developing article the company should repair that because there is nothing happened for the government. So the companies should pay for these damages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ty or noisy environment in our society. So that the pollution rapidly growing up & the ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o it's growing up day by day. While someone or a company make any indu...
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Line 9, column 531, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'these companies'?
Suggestion: this company; these companies
... the government should look after above these company who make the dusty environment and shou...
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Line 9, column 605, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'these companies'?
Suggestion: this company; these companies
...nvironment and should collect fine from these company. If it isn't done, one da...
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Line 15, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd the low land countries will be sink. As opposed to the greenhouse effect has be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, well, while, kind of, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05204460967 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66761557191 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542750929368 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6986153004 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5263157895 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1578947368 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358893130428 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110481590346 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115569416699 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227441115846 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827652169523 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.