I completely agree with this statement that few people opine that competitive games which are played alone or in group have no vital role in school activities whereas, according to me sports are essential for schools to have fit and healthy students.
Every school today invest in sports clubs, playgrounds and important equipments for students. For example, someone well said, only a sound body have strong mind. Schools prime goal is to excel in results and students with high intellectual knowledge and perfect healthy will inhance marks. Also, all the students are not bookworms some are athletes. As a result, today people have businesses like fitness clubs and scores of people opt sports as profession. Therefore, schools provide all stuff required for playing games according to different age groups and assign professional trainers known as coaches, who guide students about various sports for instance rugby etcetera. Furthermore, schools also organise various competitions to improvise students enthusiasm for games and provide opportunities like state and national level scholarships.
Sports is so important in this era that schools have imposed grading system that implies to the overall percentage of academics. That's why, today more and more students participate in curriculum activities whether it is on individual basis or in teams. More importantly, today technology is on its peaks and that made children couch potatoes which made it obligatory for schools to take considerable actions so that students must get along in sports because that not only boast their moral but also establish many skills like team work etc.
In conclusion, i believe that schools play an important role in establishing interest in sports in children. That's why, there is awareness today for career in sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41696113074 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75263883658 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1976921012 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156463644194 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593510694763 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297151151034 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104615937639 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341039599242 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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