In today's era, crime has became one of the alarming issue in every nation. Some people think that not only deprivation but societal issues are the main cause while other believe that it results from human's behavior.In my perspective, I am in support of the former view that etiquettes and beggary are the main cause of attempting crime, lets analyse both the conversations from societal perspective.
First and the foremost, some people advocate that crime results from privation and civil issues as in various countries people are thriving for food and shelter which lead them to attempt robbery and concealment. For example, robbery at hotels and shops for food. Moreover, enormous social problems like not only cheated by someone but also jealousy lead to various atrocity such as murder and suicidal attempts.
Furthermore, not only adults but children also learn these type of misdeeds to exemplify robbery of toys, food, accessories, books. Hence, it effects the children's mentality and way of living. In addition, nowadays almost every young adult have been indulge in drugs due to qhich parents avoid to give money to them. Thus, they attempt robbery.
However, there are still others who do content the first notion and support the other that bad behavior results in crime. Firstly, bad behavior can commonly seen in many individuals which can be result of some issues in their personal life like feeling jealous, cheating and many more. Secondly, few people are also diagnosed with high temper which can be the cause of some crimes.
In a conclusion, penury and communal problems are present in many countries and are the main reasons of caper and corruption.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
In todays era, crime has became one of the alarming issue in every nati...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ve that it results from humans behavior.In my perspective, I am in support of the ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'indulged'.
Suggestion: indulged
...days almost every young adult have been indulge in drugs due to qhich parents avoid to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13868613139 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49395881515 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4692462635 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257471864041 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708834193275 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733874154396 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11559098446 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787052448052 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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