Some people believe that educational qualifications will always bring success in life. Other people say that educational qualifications do not necessarily bring success. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Evidentially People spend a lot of time at schools and universities every single day; therefore education is a major part of their lives. Although there are good arguments in favor of the necessity of educational qualifications in people success, I personally believe that people should find their own way of success and happiness and education cannot guarantee that.
Some people would argue that educational is a must for everyone in order to succeed. It is undeniable that education plays an important role in our future lives specifically when we are seeking for a job, our educational background can help us to find a suitable job. There are numerous job offers waiting for a person with proper field of study because in some positions you must have professional information in case of being able to make a right decision and moving forward in your career life.
On the other hand, some people including me believe that, educational qualifications are not vital for everybody to get succeed. We state that there are many different pathways towards success. Various items are involved to make a person fulfilled. Besides that there are lots of jobs that there is no need to any kind of education. While there are great artists all over the world working based on their inspiration and surprising people with their instinct art, famous athletes just use their physical strength to win matches and succeed.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments in favor of necessity of educational qualification; I personally believe that it is not the only way to find success and satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
...r a job, our educational background can help us to find a suitable job. There are numerous job ...
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Line 2, column 512, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...ward in your career life. Also, in some cases education itself is a way of success. A...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...to get succeed. We state that there are many different pathways towards success. Various items...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, kind of, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08626198083 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85644087249 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575079872204 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2562978333 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291822018229 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103761099695 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955905429719 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187335472563 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637817223976 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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