Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The tuition fee for higher education is always an issue appealing to people’s attention. It is said that the governments should abolish fees to allow everyone to access university, but it seems to me this suggestion will have more disadvantages than advantages.
There are many compelling reasons why students should be permitted to pursue college without a fee. On the individual level, after graduating from university, people will have sufficient skills, knowledge to get a decent job. It will help them take care of themselves and support their family. On the societal level, a lot of skilled laborers will push the economy, which will result in a thriving economy. Moreover, a society with many educated people will be a civilized one.
Although waiving tuition has some benefits, I would contend that it still has some adverse on both students and society. First, if everyone can easily access to higher education, without fee, they won’t appreciate their study. It will lead to a bad result so this method may cost both government's budget and student’s time. Second, the government has a ton of things to pay for such as medical, traffic, national defense,... so that coverage for all student’s tuition at university can put a strain on government coffers. Consequently, it will make budget deficits, tax hikes, or reduced welfare among others.
Despite some advantages of abolishing tuition, the disadvantages will overshadow them so I strongly believe that government should continue to charge for higher education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Suggestion: , .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30204081633 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88083471637 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648979591837 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1766905585 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20621944211 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068065608797 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418480644215 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127654108675 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385575552458 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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