Some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful. Others feel that it is more important to have a good leader. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Undoubtedly, cooperation among employees and management leads to an increase in the productivity of the firm. Some people insist that working together is the only way for enterprise success. While others argue / opine that having a good leader / manager in an organization is more crucial. In my opinion, teamwork as well as a good leader is essential for the success of a company.
To commence with, an organization consists of various departments and cooperation among each level will result in achievement of organizational objectives. For instance, in a manufacturing unit, workers working in different process stages have to work together to produce a final output. Moreover, the working atmosphere will be encouraging / positive when employees are available to help one another. Also, the workload will be shared by employees equally and this will result in an increase in productivity.
Nevertheless, a good leader is one who delegates tasks and sets a target to achieve within a certain period of time. In addition to this, an able supervisor will divide work equally among workers to reduce the work pressure. This would result in accomplishing the target on time with efficiency. For example, it is important to assign tasks to employees taking into consideration their abilities and skills. Moreover, a leader can act as a motivator and supporter in the organization by addressing the concerns of employees.
To conclude, an organization’s objectives can be achieved by working in a team. Furthermore, a good leader can delegate work equally among the employees. In my opinion, team sprit will result in the success of the organization. Sharing work will reduce work pressure and help in increasing the final output.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is the only way for enterprise success. While others argue / opine that having a good...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31272727273 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19536445792 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523636363636 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.499826989 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142485581486 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560574272537 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761931974507 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10686198743 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981078377979 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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