Some people believe that the government spends too much money on developing space exploration technology. There are many others financial needs that the government should address instead.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Recently many people criticized the government for holding extravagant space exploration. From my perspective, the spending on the space development technology is rational, however, others financial deficiency yet matter under consideration concern.
On the on hand, human's extraterrestrial activities and developments have various conspicuous benefits regard in all aspects. In other words, GPS and other satellite navigation system methodically transfers information and data from satellite that orbit round the earth to track down precisely subject, trajectory, place such as missing person's site or migration route of a particular species. Furthermore, according to the advance of science that bring about gallops of new technological conception and invention, for instance, AR( Augmented Reality) and VR( Virtual reality) along with different algorithms and references, location-based service is certainly indispensable
On the other hand, there are aspects of life that need to be addressed and concerned urgently. The environment is the typical but foremost perpetual problem facing by humanity, due to the modernize and industrialize process of humanity civilization that lead to sever severe environmental degradations. Government should build collective consciousness either raise awareness of the inhabitants, expenditure expansion for preserving environment through subsidizes or polices is extremely exigent. Another alarming subject is the food scarcity and water famine is continuously omnipresent in many areas of the world, Annual reports found out great figures of world's population who is still suffer from starvation and dehydration eventually women and children is the most common victim of the disaster. Furthermore, those endure malnourished could prone to various epidemic diseases and maladies with ease. Hence, humanity as a whole should coalesce to solve this thorny global problem
In conclusion, Despite the immense benefits of the cosmic technology development that the government is exploiting, I personally believe beside the environment deterioration and food shortage from aforementioned cases there are multifarious problems with financial needs that the government altogether should concentrate on
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 336, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ject, trajectory, place such as missing persons site or migration route of a particular...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tual problem facing by humanity, due to the modernize and industrialize process of humanity c...
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Line 3, column 689, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
...gures of worlds population who is still suffer from starvation and dehydration eventua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13418530351 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30642680648 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67731629393 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.068977343 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.0 106.682146367 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186094999314 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664993934046 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634279347202 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12708734474 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739400985218 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.63 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.87 12.4159519038 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.58 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.