Some people believe that the government spends too much money on developing space exploration technology. There are many others financial needs that the government should address instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With development age of science and technology, space exploration consider as essential achievement of the human. Today, the government spend abundant money for the space findings so, often question arises like government should pay up money in space development is beneficial for human or they consider other field for investing financial things, that would be made the better individual life. I firmly believe that higher authorities should pay money for other services that really require for the human.
there are many manifold points that shore up my perception. First and foremost, now a days developing country invest enormous amount of the money in space science but, they does not try to make country economically strong. Several growing up nations have been almost spent millions dollar in that and in many cases they were not success to get intended result. For example, country like Srilanka and Pakistan disbursed lot of amount in space science but those nations are not concern about other aspects like country poorness and unemployment.
Moving further, according to NASA there are plethora of space apparatus are flying outside of the earth and it will be detrimental for other planets including our home, owing to pollution of those spare-parts enters inside the planets and burn. As per report before 10 years there were almost 10 thousand spare-parts exists, but in last 5 years the numbers were rose up significantly.
To conclude, every coin has a two sides. space exploration is not an exception, because in contemporary world human population is substantially increased and it is important to find out other house for living creature. Hence, we consider this step is essentially for auspicious future. However, look up on current scenario, definitely we can say that, the government should invest money in another factor and less proportion of budget must pay in space exploration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, really, so, for example, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31475409836 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75859507999 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609836065574 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3698613985 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.692307692 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198199406968 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645654121517 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609122625964 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112620765973 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796263323442 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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