Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Experiencing bad life situations, such as an unsuitable job or running out of money, is considered to be an appealing lifetime experience by some people, whereas others hold the idea of finding ways to make such situations better is a much more attractive option, and I think that this approach is more reasonable for a number of reasons.
On the one hand, people who argue that it is normal to accept situations, such as financial constraints or not fulfilling jobs in a person’s life, believe that having been through such situations improves one’s life skills. People do not feel stressed when they come across these situations again and try to be ready through their lifetime. Another possible reason why people should accept bad situations is that such situations can be a key role to push them forward, leading them to work harder on themselves to improve their lifestyle. For example, many world-known people such as Steve Jobs or Mark Zuckerberg had experienced several hardships through their early life which are the main reasons how they become successful and stand out later.
However, I think it is reasonable if people try to handle such situations and look for ways of improving them. In other words, once they face these problems, they should make an attempt to get over these problems instead of staying still doing nothing. If they have a job that does not make a person satisfied, they should simply change it since there are a number of jobs that do not even require certain special skills now. Furthermore, running out of money is a common thing in an individual’s life and there have not been many serious cases like starving or death so far related to it. As long as the people work and put some effort in their life, they will highly likely find a way to improve it.
In conclusion, while some people feel that it is acceptable to be in bad situation because it helps them to pursue their aims, I believe that people should have to search for ways to improve their lifestyle by changing jobs as well as working hard.
Mistakes: articles, referencing words, punctuations, prepositions, grammar mistakes, spelling, countable uncountable nouns.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, well, whereas, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9347826087 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68128182251 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6281612995 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.333333333 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32510197303 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12341888704 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080558183102 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171322514102 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938442014644 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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