Some people said if they stick in problematic circumstances such as an unsuitable job or financial problem, they are better off accepting them; however, others believe they should change the situation for the better, including me. It is argued that if anyone works at the moment, have to stick to it, even though it is frustrating because finding a job is more difficult than saving your own. However, many people with this attitude do not consider the role of job pressure. For example, if they cannot get along very well with colleagues, they'll wear out after a while. In addition, many people think it is impossible to become wealthy, especially when they were born in a poor family. It goes against human intrinsic since human beings are seeking ways to improve life.
On the other hand, each of us has a certain talent and any job needs special talent. So if someone found out his talent, that would be a great idea to change his job to a relevant job field. For instance, Mohammad Reza used to be a run-out-of-the-mill musician but changed his career to actor and then shoot to fame as a famous successful actor.
Furthermore, becoming affluent is not out of question. Numerous people are becoming rich nowadays that used to have from hand to mouth but ended up very wealthy. For instance, Mr. Musk, a billionaire entrepreneur was a refugee born in South Africa but now he is the richest man in the United States.
In conclusion, human beings always search for ways to enhance their life, so it is out of mind to say that they should accept their failure and do not do their best.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 541, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
...ot get along very well with colleagues, theyll wear out after a while. In addition, ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65836298932 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61869482647 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629893238434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3886569257 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153568501735 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442647278666 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594967697211 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710966325062 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681690906233 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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