Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is widely acknowledged that the masses reckon that accepting bad situations such as getting a job not as expected or being underpaid. However, others assert that it is better to attempt to change these situations. This essay will explore both points of view before giving my outlooks.
On the one hand, people should be satisfied with what happens in their life. There is no denying that individuals can be in a jam at times, and the worst scenario is that the masses are overwrought. As a result, people fall behind and cannot boost their confidence as a hundred percent. Moreover, accepting difficulties is synonymous with accepting our limits so that human beings can find viable solutions to remedy their issues, which have a positive bearing on people’s sense of psychological security when they embark on doing more extent. Furthermore, in some cases, for example, the country’s economic downturn will do more harm than good for us changing the status quo, let alone people are capable of depriving unworthy troubles of this tendency.
On the other hand, I subscribe to nations whose school of thought is changing and finding out ways to improve bad situations. Admittedly, humans attempt to move up in life, they will not only bring benefits to themselves but also boost the socio-economic background of their countries, such as stable finance, policy, and so on. Besides that, individuals get opportunities to cultivate relevant job skills, enrich life experiences. Effectively, the masses can achieve more hands-on experiences to boost their self-improvement, which is the most prominent determinant to get success and a welcome life in the future. For instance, entrepreneurs or famous scientists who reward a host of awards never let go of putting their endeavors.
All in all, I embrace people to strive for well-intentioned enterprises to change situations because they can boost their confidence to adventure their comfort zone and also bring out inside latent talents.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2375 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99350860196 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628125 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0910615204 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.714285714 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148478919674 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529043334531 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541816182517 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107403519745 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897581433892 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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