Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Opinions are different as to whether people should come to terms with unsatisfactory circumstances or put their efforts into those unpleasant conditions and transcend limitations to elevate the quality of their life. This essay will elaborate on both views and expound why the latter viewpoint is preferable.
To commence with, life, in and of itself, has always rife with challenges which invade our tranquility. So insurmountable are these difficulties that some individuals would prefer a sufficient lifestyle than being wealthy. The underlying cause of such mindset could be related to the primary nature of human beings: comport and comfort; these people are of the opinion that the less they get involve in the modern-life-related rat race, the less depressed they become, and they find themselves in the state of euphoria. Rather than wrestling with the issues, they would merely resort to God when faced with problems, and thanks to this lifestyle, their wealth is regarded as their time and their personal values, as they can take it to their family.
On the other hand, those who are opposed to these attitudes, strongly believe that such opinions are the breeding ground for a demotivated society, and consequently, sow the seeds of poverty. Differently put, they prioritize taking up their problems, be it personal or imposed by external factors, over accepting them. In other words, not only do they contribute their bit to have a dynamic society, but also, they will make an easier life for their families. For instance, if they face with troubles, two things can come in useful. Firstly, the eustress coming out of this mentality, act as a driving force to find solutions and overcome those hindrances. In addition, with truckloads of money they earn, they might be able to have a competitive edge over their counterparts.
To conclude, although staying away from the fast pace of today’s life and welcoming substandard life with open arms has its own advantages, but totally it does more harm than good, as we would end up with destitution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions are different as to whether people should come to terms with unsati...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y the latter viewpoint is preferable. To commence with, life, in and of itself...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, as to, for instance, in addition, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14243323442 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8641702145 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623145400593 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7625959247 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.307692308 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954977829661 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364464997494 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379371785122 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576136161022 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261073975532 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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