Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In our time and age, occurring unpleasant situations during the life-time is an issue that numerous people have brought ideas about. Furthermore, disputation as to whether admitting agonizing circumstances including inadequate occupancy and job deficit or ameliorating the condition of such situations has been a highly long-running controversy for a certain period of time now. This essay will display a further deliberation with the prototypes on both outlooks and its influence on society.
Granted, it is widely accepted that we have been dwelling in a “the rich get richer whereas the poor get poorer” in terms of income gaps within a generation. Thence, at the present time, myriad number of our quotidian hassles is linked to our job satisfaction as well as revenues or money shortages. Consequently, an accelerating number of people deemed this conditions as hardships of life and try to accept this situation easily. On ground that they speculated that the life is consisting of difficulties and this is principles and regulations of life.
Needless to say, there are those who maintain the idea that people should endeavor severely when they confront tough incidents or suffer from the pauperism. There are several reasons for this tendency. First and foremost, they eternally lead their life with faith and hope. As we know, the mankind should believe in himself in the first place. On the other hand, they prefer to struggle with the trials of life as well as it render them to become adamant and enlightened members of society.
With the above-presented demonstration, I would like to draw my conclusion as follows. In final analysis, I have a propensity to confide that we always face with difficulties during our life-time. Therefore, it is a best strategy to maintain equilibrium between the difficulties of life and attempts. Because, every attempt toward courageousness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether
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... the difficulties of life and attempts. Because, every attempt toward courageousness. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, as to, as well as, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29801324503 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07406061925 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6529482663 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12431449184 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341017319926 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429958310928 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703492258918 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485176454768 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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