Some people believe that it is best to encourage children to have a healthy diet at school while others believe that parents should be the ones to teach children to have a healthy diet.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, it has been debatable in terms of the diet of children. Whilst some people think that it do wonders for children to have a good diet at school, others firmly believe that children should be taught about a healthy diet by their parents. According to my knowledge, I think that it would be useful for children to have a diet guide from parents.
On the one hand, there is a wide range of compelling reasons to explain why children ought to be encouraged to follow a healthy diet at school. First of all, due to the fact that teachers in school usually have a keen understanding of diet, they are able to impart to children. In fact, mentors or tutors will create a specific diet plan for students to pursue. They could provide some kinds of healthy cuisine that are beneficial to children, and types of dishes that children should steer clear of consuming. Another notable reason is that peer pressure would be a great motivation for students to have a healthy diet. Classmates may be the ones who boost children to savor good food. In other words, they are likely to taste healthier dishes when they see their friends enjoying them.
On the other hand, parents also play a significant role in setting up a healthy eating habit for children to stick. One evident strength is that parents are the ones who know clearly about children’s taste, so they can establish a plausible diet and adjust the contents of the meals which is pertinent for children to consume. Furthermore, home-cooked food makes children feel more comfortable eating. Because they have family members together with eating with them, they are likely to try more, especially trying new dishes that are healthier and more conducive to their mental and physical health. As a result, children could avoid some serious diseases, such as obesity.
In conclusion, although there is an array of benefits for children when they have the chance to follow a dietary pattern from school, I strongly believe that it will be better for children to have a good eating habit from their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76243093923 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47945681833 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524861878453 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4919264626 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427408139177 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152410345397 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105443704375 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28667911685 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985742732325 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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