Some people believe that it is best way to accept bad situations,such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued whether it is better way to cooperate with bad situations like less amount of money or doing a job which not liked by masses or try to compete with that types of challenges to tackle with this obstacles. However, I am in accord with second perception and I will explicated both the prospectives along with my viewpoint in the fourth upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with description, the one school of thought in the favour of former statement and deems that today’s challenging world is full with competitors.Due to this, everyone is running made cat rat race to earn huge amount of wealth and try to touch the highest stair of success. As a results, it is very difficult for humans to get good job related to their interest, choices as well. That is why it is beneficial for people to accept that bed conditions and please themselves to give priority to that jobs which the get easily and start doing that unsatisfactory works rather than choice. In addition to this, lack of money is also major concern among individuals in present days as nowadays it is not easy to get vast proportions of wealth that is why people need to stay positive and start their lives with utilising some amount of pennies which they have only. For example, majority of regions are suffering from unemployment issue that is why it is not a piece of cake to get satisfactory job or more money. All in all, it is best to accept the situation and cooperate with that.
Nevertheless, the another school of thought in against with primary view and said that it is not a good idea to leave the situation than tackling with it. The reason is that, nowadays parents are spending huge amount of wealth on the education of their pupils and their degree achievements with good marks. So, it is right of every youngster to achieve the goal to get job according their interest, earn more bread and butter to meet their expenses as well. This is the reason that nothing is impossible in this world so that is why they should never give up and try their best to win their satisfaction level. For instance, the owner of dell company which is manufacturing laptops is not completed his degree but he did not like to work under other person. Likewise, he wants his own kingdom such as business. Due to this,he was working with full dedication and now become a owner of a company. Lastly, humans try to improve their hurdles to tackle with that types of obstacles.
In my prospective, I am in favour of last statement because I think that people should make them strong to fight with that problems as compared to leave that on god is will. Additionally, it is fact that humans beings have three basic needs like food,shelter and clothes and satisfied with that but i considered that if people want to fulfil their dreams and have to change in reality than they never feel afraid from that kinds of problems as it is stumbling stone in their way to stop them to get. Moving further, humans have not nature to accept defeat because humans is inspiration. The fact is that, people never give up in every fields such as science, medical,political and etcetera. For example, human is the only person who reached on the moon with their efforts.so, people have to try to defeat that bed conditions than leaving them.
To recapitulate, although, it is tough task to search job related to choice or interest and earn more money for masses in present competitive world, yet it is generally said that nothing is impossible in this world so if generations will do their better to achieve level of success than they never loss and definitely win the dreams which come to true.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'explicate'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, likewise, nevertheless, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 13.1623246493 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 30.0 7.30460921844 411% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 78.0 24.0651302605 324% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 106.0 41.998997996 252% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3003.0 1615.20841683 186% => OK
No of words: 646.0 315.596192385 205% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64860681115 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0414809386 4.20363070211 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60910316349 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 296.0 176.041082164 168% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458204334365 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 914.4 506.74238477 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.9728905514 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.5 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3636363636 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168208105882 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532796222815 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435045286365 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937848054922 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318081674797 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.