Today, more and more computers and laptops are using in hospitals, schools, offices and banks. Some people think that these tools improve the conditions of those sectors. Do you agree or disagree?
Due to rapid advancement in technology which upgrade the versions of computers and laptops day by day as well as allowing health centres, an educational centres, government offices and banks to expand those tools. Moreover, a section of society deems that to utilise those gadgets in various areas can enhance their conditions. However, I strongly accord with the perception because these modern equipment assist several sectors to keep safe their records, easy to search information, handle accounts and so many in different manners.
There are multifarious factors to support this prospective and an initial is that nowadays more and more work are online so that is why all sectors are fully dependent on computers, laptops and others who are crucial for these. Additionally, a majority of schools in fact almost schools utilise PC and laptops to save the records related to their students, schools finance and etcetera. On the other hand, today a vast amount of exam are holding on online with the help of internet and give results quickly. For example, Google, YouTube and other websites are also beneficial for learners to search information regarding their studies. Apart from this, a huge proportion of students complete their projects, assignments as well with using modern gadgets. Likewise, computers and laptops offer aids to hospitals in their medical treatments, record data about their patients, knowledge related to medicine stocks and many more. In addition to this, these tools are helpful to run large machines of medical centres like MRI, CSPAN, X-RAY machines and so on.
Moving further, the another major benefit of this notion is that these gadgets assist banks to preserve information about customers, records about withdrawal and deposit money, opening accounts as well. In contrast, it is not easy task for banks to save records in form of papers which take a lots of time. For instance, ATM (Automatic taller machines) beneficial for humans to withdraw cash in an emergency who operated by computers. Even though, regime offices not only use computers and laptops to preserve information but also make documents related to citizens such as birth certificate, driving license, adhar card and etcetera at online and everyone check data related to them comfortably staying at home. Similarly, authority offices can faster find any records with the help of those gadgets.
In conclusion, although, computers and laptops make it convenient for different sectors to work quickly due to expanding these gadgets but these reduce dramatically importance of masses in these areas. Nevertheless, presence of these tools can provide huge enhancement in the situations of various fields as compared with earlier periods.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'centre'?
Suggestion: centre
...allowing health centres, an educational centres, government offices and banks to expand...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this prospective and an initial is that nowadays more and more work are online s...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ve records in form of papers which take a lots of time. For instance, ATM Automatic ta...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...laptops to preserve information but also make documents related to citizens such ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, similarly, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2315.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3587962963 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69153045783 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4151970856 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.176470588 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4117647059 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7647058824 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158041276551 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047218245879 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386410537078 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973658475032 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241883527416 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.