Some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Children's education is one of the most controversial and hot debated areas as every parent wants the marvelous future for the child. Thus, there is a point of view that attraction to sport should consider devoting in schools, whereas opponents claim that studying academic is more significant for kids’ pastime. This essay will examine both side and explain why is Physical Education is likely to be an integral part of curriculum.
On the one hand, in the modern world children are more and more involved in playing video games and watching online videos. Moreover, it seems that majority of youngsters since early ages have private smartphone and spend plenty of time with it. This perhaps leads to the sedentary lifestyle and obesity among schoolers. Some social researches in Australia confirm the fact that young people devote their leisure time to the TV. Secondly, including Physical culture as a constant subject from primary school may give the students an opportunity for further definition of their profession. It is means that not all pupils are appropriate for the technical or humanitarian science, someone can be excellent in physical achievement and performance. By this way a person could understand this in state educational system and obtain more effective career prospects.
Conversely, recipients of the academic programs and technological progress of the society might point out that it is considerable to rely on the mathematician subjects due to the needs of the nation in engineers, constructors and scientists. This makes sense in case when kids are tempted by that subjects from his childhood, however, in opposite situation it will be waste of their time. Finally, in megapolices the problem is the threat for youngers play for sport games outside, because of the lack of suitable space, what is sufficient issue for the authorities’ solving.
It is logical to conclude that despite of the shortage and unappropriate location for the doing sports for children and tendency of someones for science subjects, involving young generation into physical activity has outweigh advantages, which community can not deny in form of overall health conditions as physical so mental.
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Message: Use past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35428571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92667394975 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634285714286 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7202378082 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.857142857 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249442364746 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699464731646 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372947173889 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137464218662 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519678333373 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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