Some people believe it is a good idea for students to work part time to ensure better opportunity in the future? To what extent do you agree and disagree.
It is often said that students should have part time jobs alongside study for better future. I completely agree with this view and will be give my reasons below.
To commence with,the salary students earn from their part time jobs is beneficial for their many ways. Attending universities requires much more money to pay for their numbers of expenses. Not only tution fees, cost of books, academics supplies as well as accomodation, if student's are living far away from their homes. Teenagers understanding the value of earn money. By working and earning their own as adults. Also they learn their responsibilities and self reliance. Apart from that, they also become independence from their parents, throughout the financial conditions.
At the same time,the working students while in schools boosts the student's future career prospects. The related major,they will know the details that which have been they tought, gain real experience and practical skills.And boost their information. If the job will not directly connected to the field that those could not get it, young people will be qualified to the position and anyone no get this without any experience. For example, we must understanding the children and their wants from working at Daycare center to makes the difference in landing position in marketing department of Toy company when compared to someone that has no any experience at all.
To recapitulate,I believe that those with part time jobs will thrive in society,and also the students should be encourage for work during their studies.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...is often said that students should have part time jobs alongside study for better future....
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Line 2, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...give my reasons below. To commence with,the salary students earn from their part ti...
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Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ith,the salary students earn from their part time jobs is beneficial for their many ways....
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...orking and earning their own as adults. Also they learn their responsibilities and s...
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... financial conditions. At the same time,the working students while in schools boost...
^^^^
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...ture career prospects. The related major,they will know the details that which have b...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...in real experience and practical skills.And boost their information. If the job wil...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'connect'
Suggestion: connect
...formation. If the job will not directly connected to the field that those could not get i...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'make'.
Suggestion: make
...wants from working at Daycare center to makes the difference in landing position in m...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...mpany when compared to someone that has no any experience at all. To recapitulate...
^^
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... any experience at all. To recapitulate,I believe that those with part time jobs ...
^^
Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... recapitulate,I believe that those with part time jobs will thrive in society,and also th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...th part time jobs will thrive in society,and also the students should be encourage f...
^^^^
Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...society,and also the students should be encourage for work during their studies.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, apart from, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.236 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73770999195 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0980727443 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167677161511 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623638321663 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675276082994 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124846931022 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429212412218 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...is often said that students should have part time jobs alongside study for better future....
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...give my reasons below. To commence with,the salary students earn from their part ti...
^^^^
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ith,the salary students earn from their part time jobs is beneficial for their many ways....
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...orking and earning their own as adults. Also they learn their responsibilities and s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... financial conditions. At the same time,the working students while in schools boost...
^^^^
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...ture career prospects. The related major,they will know the details that which have b...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...in real experience and practical skills.And boost their information. If the job wil...
^^^
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'connect'
Suggestion: connect
...formation. If the job will not directly connected to the field that those could not get i...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'make'.
Suggestion: make
...wants from working at Daycare center to makes the difference in landing position in m...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...mpany when compared to someone that has no any experience at all. To recapitulate...
^^
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... any experience at all. To recapitulate,I believe that those with part time jobs ...
^^
Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... recapitulate,I believe that those with part time jobs will thrive in society,and also th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...th part time jobs will thrive in society,and also the students should be encourage f...
^^^^
Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...society,and also the students should be encourage for work during their studies.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, apart from, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.236 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73770999195 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0980727443 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167677161511 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623638321663 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675276082994 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124846931022 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429212412218 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.