In the new digitalization era, many information around the world spread-up fastly as the same as the growth of media communication such as the internet. However, some masses have their reason to the argument that the information in the aspect about science and business shall be published and others believe that information must be shared price.
To begin with, the easy access to information leads to the development of humankind. By the invention of the internet, today, the education sector has increased the number of research materials where these research are shared and continued by the scientist around the world. For instance, research about aerospace material has developed from wood material, changed by aluminum, and today, substituted to the composite. Likewise, in the business sector, the enormous companies, such as Google, have opened the business plan to the public to get more investor. The use of information brings advantage to the people.
On the other hand, some data must be protected and given to the appropriate user. In the military sector, all of the data and research is secured. If the information is known by the public, the utilization of information will seize the country defense. Similarly, some research in the international shall be priced to preventing the dysfunction of information.
In conclusion, sharing data to the masses shall be considered based on the importance. Some information in the education is shared freely to improve the development of research, moreover, not all of the information is protected to prohibit the malfunction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
In the new digitalization era, many information around the world spread-up ...
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Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
In the new digitalization era, many information around the world spread-up fastly as th...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...propriate user. In the military sector, all of the data and research is secured. If the in...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... development of research, moreover, not all of the information is protected to prohibit th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, moreover, similarly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34661354582 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04139366009 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517928286853 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9454633368 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.230769231 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311385105488 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104454282801 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738998128852 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20219123238 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051268591506 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.