Some people believe it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Whereas there are some people who oppose the idea of sharing data because of its importance or having worth to be free, others opine that sharing as much information as possible especially in the academic field and business is excellent. While I agree with the later, I think the type of data and its sensitivity has to be taken into consideration. Both sides of the argument will be discussed and my support for the later view will be explored in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, sharing data should not be free because it is quite worthy or of extreme importance. This depends mainly on its nature; information in some cases can be considered one of the organization’s assets. Marketing companies, for example, regard their marketing research they are doing must be paid, and the exerted effort in collecting and analyzing data should not be free. Moreover, information or research might be sensitive or crucial in other cases, For instance, military’s research or data is often decisive information.
On the other side, making information sharable mainly in scientific communities and business field is great, and I agree with this view. The reason for this is numerous benefits which can be achieved. When information is shared in business as an example, there will be a great chance for cooperation between firms, and hence a lot of job vacancies would be offered. Similarly, if researchers had the ability to access and view last up-to-date scientific papers, there would be gigantic opportunities for resolving several problems, such as proposing effective remedies for incurable diseases.
In conclusion, despite the importance of information or its value, I believe that it is better to share information primarily in academic world and business because it would have many benefits, and only in some cases it should not be shared like sensitive date.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19607843137 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00230591886 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3577951692 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336956765087 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124921329954 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952209252845 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226899010182 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681733776068 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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