Whereas there are some people who oppose the idea of sharing data because of its importance or having worth to be for free, others opine this and assume sharing as much as possible especially in academic field and business is excellent. While I agree with the later, I think the type of data and its sensitivity has to be taken into consideration. In this essay, both sides of the argument will be discussed and my support for the later view will be explored in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, sharing data should not be free because it is so worthy or extreme important may be true. This maybe return to its nature; information in some cases can be considered one of the organization’s assets. Marketing companies, for example, regard their marketing research they are doing must be paid, and the exert effort in collecting and analyzing data should not be free. Moreover, information or research might be sensitive or crucial in other status. For instance, military’s research or data is often decisive information.
On the other side, making information sharable mainly in scientific communities and business field is great, and I agree with this view. The reason for this is numerous benefits can be achieved. When information shared in business as an example, there will be a great chance for cooperation between firms, and hence a lot of job vacancies would be offered. Similarly, if researchers had the ability to access and view last up-to-date scientific papers, there would be gigantic opportunities for resolving several problems, such as proposing effective remedies for incurable diseases.
In conclusion, despite the importance of information or its value, I believe that it is better to share information primarily in academic world and business because it would have many benefits, and only in some cases it should not be share like sensitive date.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...search they are doing must be paid, and the exert effort in collecting and analyzing data...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12258064516 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96220380879 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5148031446 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323513731487 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117680210677 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856301142177 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218769508312 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613624621575 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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