Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Information is always a source to enrich the knowledge. It is most sought after, however, many believe that a few of the information is sensitive. So, it is best if it is not disseminated. This essay will discuss both the aspects and support the opinion with relevant examples.
It is reckoned that the availability of all data in schools and other organisations can certainly help in the development of the nation as whole. It would aid the creative minds to absorb the details to come up with innovative ideas. For instance, the Einstein’s theory provided a platform to several scientists to research. I think that if every data is made accessible, then it would be threatening to our planet. Therefore, limited access to the important files should be available.
From the others’ point of view, disclosing the important statistics can put the lives of the mankind in jeopardy. Because there is still a large section of the society who change their allegiance to their country for monetary benefits. Like, plenty of the websites online has uploaded instructions related to the use of nuclear power which In my viewpoint is not a healthy content, especially for the people with the evil intentions. The government should strictly ban and taken down these pages on the internet.
In a nutshell, it is advocated by the authorities of this department that to acquire the proper understanding of the specific subject relative guidelines ought to be presented for academic and research usage. But if each and every info is released to every individual, then it could definitely have destructive effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08679245283 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96936775954 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630188679245 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3864394824 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12974438124 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367007545461 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363314480604 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707171294585 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384458986888 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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