Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Privacy seems to be impossible nowadays that our modern world may appear incapable of providing it. Some information can be readily accessed online, shared through words of mouth or sometimes could be illegally taken. While there are individuals who approve of information sharing freely especially in academics, business and research, others think that much value should be put on such information and not be communicated openly.
Access to information can be beneficial. One example is for the purpose of learning. For instance, a professor, who is at the same time a doctor, can teach his medicine students about a recent study about a newly-discovered pathogen infecting the clients. Another significance of sharing information is for the benefit of research. In scientific studies, if data gathered and result findings were shared to certain people, improvements can be done or mistakes can be lessened.
On the other hand, information sharing can also be critical especially if it is sensitive and if there is a wrong recipient. An example is a registered nurse telling an unauthorized friend about the result of a client’s blood test. The nurse in this scenario is breaching the confidentiality of the client’s data which could result in a criminal offence. Posting one’s whereabouts on social media could be another example. Strangers knowing a person’s exact location can do a crime. One can easily abduct a person especially if other descriptions about the person is accessible online.
In my opinion, sharing information have both positive and negative sides. It can either create harm or provide safety and learning. People should just be vigilant on which facts can be safely publicized and to whom these details should be shared to.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34285714286 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10575502667 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3306231881 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234090580221 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809488950499 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803085492301 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158374506975 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725699495784 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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