Without any saying our era is the era of information and technology. One of the most important things about information is the capability of sharing it in different fields such scientific research, business and the academic world. There are two kinds of points of view which indicate whether it is better to share this information all or some of them are too important to be mentioned. This essay will discuss both ideas.
On the one hand, Sharing information as much as possible can lead us to many opportunities. First of all, gaining acknowledgement is a good way to improve databases in a variety of majors. Furthermore, being in touch with other experts can increase the development's pace plus it is like a leader to avoid the mistakes that had been made before.
On the other hand, it is not always safe to share all the learnings because it can cause some security issues. For instance, sharing the map of water distribution infrastructures of a city which is politically critical can bring the risk of deliberate damages. Besides, if for example, a company's rivals will know everything about its secrets, they will overtake its place in the market. Lastly, some kinds of information are really hard to get and they cost too much for the holders; so it is better to pay for them to have access to them.
To sum up, in my opinion, it is better to hold some critical pieces of information inaccessible for everybody, however, sharing knowledge os an inseparable part of modern societies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, really, so, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84435797665 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91612890303 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599221789883 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8426284494 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5833333333 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33413833768 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108881737676 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840276241177 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185017820371 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993023505148 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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