Some people believe money is a less important factor than free time for quality of life. What other factors are necessary to live a good quality of lifestyle?
It is presumed by certain sets of societies that leisure time is more important than having a colossal sum of money to lead a life filled with complacency; however I stand with the fact that other factors like reputed as well as satisfied job, a healthy lifestyle and a happy long lasting relationship with near and dear ones are also considered to have a worthwhile living.
To embark with, undoubtedly, in this contemporary era, a good quality of lifestyle is not attained without money. For the elite class people, lifestyle is meant to be having a big mansion to live, a long car to ride and attending A-one parties. They get these all materialistic things with the money. As money is an asset for them to pursuit the happiness in their own way and to spend a luxurious lifestyle. Nevertheless, it does not mean that the middle class people with little earnings are not spending a good living. For instance, the naval officer is happy about his job despite of little earnings. What he desires to feel is utmost satisfaction and recognition, without having an urge in himself to getting more and more money.
Marching ahead, the other numerous factors like a healthy lifestyle and strong relationship with family and friends cannot be denied to live a good quality of lifestyle. There is a Mongolian proverb that "Most important happiness in human's life is its health". Being robust and healthy in all means (socially, mentally and physically) can ultimately lead the life happiness to reach at the authentic pinnacle and to enjoy the stupendous fruition. For example, a healthy and sound person can live longer and enjoy good lifestyle as compare to the one who is indulged into myriad illnesses. Also, love and affection with the family and friends can lead the person to live happy and satisfied life. To quote an instance, socialization is an imperative factor to achieve healthy lifestyle and those who spend their leisure time with friends, family and neighbors are more likely to spend joyful life than the others who are self-centered.
To reiterate, money is important up to some extent to live a good lifestyle, but other factors also have a crucial place in everybody’s life. Ergo, quality of life depends on many factors and all of them have their essential role in human beings' lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...them have their essential role in human beings lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72784728195 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2583761592 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.722222222 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405480051283 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150406791898 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167500998629 0.0667982634062 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320838582657 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.276342698014 0.056905535591 486% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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