There is no doubt that a job plays a significant role in one’s life. Although some argue that a regular monthly income is crucial over any other aspect, I support the view that other factors should be taken into account while selecting an occupation.
Those who advocate that earning is quite essential may argue that it is a sole base for livelihood and helpful in managing monthly expenses. For example, banks and other government bodies lend money, which is having a regular income up to a certain level, whether a house loan or a car loan, to a person. In contrast, if a candidate doesn’t give preference to the monthly income, he may have to compromise with his living standards and requirements.
However, I would argue that the above approach is helpful to some extent, but it cannot assure you the guarantee of success that you can quickly get by following your dream and passion. Recent research has proved that a person who joins a company on his conditions such as selecting a job profile as per the skills, passion for his work, convenient location, and company perks for extra hours performs outstandingly in his role. For instance, Mark Zuckerberg, owner of Facebook social site, had dropped out of college to pursue his dreams. If he had not given importance to his passion that time and had focused on earnings, he would have never seen such a massive success in his life.
In conclusion, while a regular income can help to make ends meet and in the planning of monthly expenses, it is my firm belief that other facts that make onboard employees delighted and satisfied with their job can help them to get success in no time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77430555556 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60829996059 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7135378794 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104515959265 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388142982813 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339548891161 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668538831493 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413379412283 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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