Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
It is true that people have a lot of ways to solve any cases in the modern world. I am convinced that now people have many opportunities to choose what they want.
Firstly, everyday people face various choices from simple needs such as bread and books to important things such as occupation and hobbies. Nowadays, people can choose any hobbies without problems, because now a lot of special places suggest a spectrum of activities for both children and adults. Similarly, there are no problems with foods or clothes in contrast to time when people were not able to produce a lot of needs. Modern equipment, however, let people opportunity to create different things with their own features. For instance, according to the research of British scientists, modern people have 1000 times more choices of clothes to compare with the 19 century.
Secondly, people have various ways to get education. It is possible to choose a suitable type of education. People can enter the colleges or universities, they are able to choose specialization without compulsion. Besides, they even graduate schools and go to work. Moreover, modern technologies give a chance to be educated online. If a person wants to work and get education simultaneously, he can take online courses. For example, according to the official information from the website "Coursera", more than 40 % of students have got a job due to their courses.
In conclusion, I can say that the modern world gives people a huge spectrum of different opportunities from necessary needs to education and appropriate jobs. To my mind, people's choices almost are not limited in contrast with previous years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14760147601 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99675204442 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9899246511 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190295665061 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657442192543 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562037273849 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131287152594 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04753052236 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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