Certain people believe that in present there are quite many choices for us. It depends on person to person. I think, definitely there is a diversity of choice one can have education and clothes.
Firstly, many individuals are given with variety of choice during their education to start there carrier importantly after the schooling, most of the students are likely to be interested in science as their subjects as they are good in memorizing theories easily, while others attracts to the Arts subject because of their creativity inability to memories pages This kind of selection enables pupils to select their interests and have a successful life ahead. For example, I read in an article written by psychologists that, a child who have an ability to be selective about the things like choosing subjects which interest them, give more success compared to the one who are forced.
On other hand, giving children to select their own choice of clothes give them confidence and self-esteem in their surroundings. Additionally, they are a number of new designer or fashionable clothes with a vast range of beautiful colours. Likewise, when an offspring wants particular colour for their clothes which suits them, not only increase their cognitive behaviour but also, they become courageous to face the short-comings. For instance, a pupil who had very low grades every time in the school gained confidence, once the mother started to present many options and says to pick one.
In conclusion, the choices have been increased for everyone particular for a teenage student to not only build their cognitive skills by pursuing in the desired field but also to wear professional clothes to be comfortable in their work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15357142857 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75939720939 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.458607301 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.3 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107114980468 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511182680699 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540029977987 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802235461626 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521487315435 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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