Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Recently, the freedom of making choices has become a debatable issue in many parts of the world. It is a common belief that in the 4.0 Industry, people have limited options, whereas I maintain that the development of living conditions allows the community to have various selections.
To begin with, each individual has each characteristic and presents an expression of a desire to show off their individualities without any stinting. In other words, in terms of some energetic and lively adolescents, they covet to enjoy some outdoor activities to meet their relaxed requirements on a daily basis like climbing or mountain biking. Conversely, parents are too conscious to let their children play these games alone because parents have obligations to save sons or daughters from being injured and dirty unless adults can set aside time for it, thus taking part in these outdoor games is infrequent even not happened. According to the Oxford survey, approximately 85% of teenagers do not have opportunities to decide anyways to escape effectively from being under pressure from their parents’ protection.
On top of that, the number of options people can choose is increasingly larger due to the sanity standpoints nowadays. To put in other words, getting married to those is decided by one’s parents in a conventional way, therefore, women had to follow the selections of their parents for later lives, and if they did not, they seemed to be disrespectful towards their previous generation. Nevertheless, adults nowadays can live in happy lives which are resulted in determinations by themselves instead of doing the same thing with what parents want. According to the Happiness Club, roughly 92% of people in the 4.0 Industry can live in married lives with true lovers without any obstacles from families.
To sum up, although in some cases, teenagers and adults have to follow the requests of their previous generation, most people are given lots of choices to choose for their own. I suggest that one should enjoy life with the best version of him or her to develop abilities and satisfy aspiration as well as asking for helpful advice from experienced adults to avoid serious consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a conventional way" with adverb for "conventional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, conversely, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as well as, in other words, in some cases, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15363128492 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86903600931 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.128780172 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.75 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0833333333 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150266628445 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563407202948 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341644395562 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943387543246 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183370016846 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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