Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shops, and on public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this contemporary life, mobile phones is one of the important part in our life. However, some people believed that should be banned in certain places such as libraries, shopping mall or public transport. It’s could be advantage in some part as communication. Meanwhile, I strongly disagree with this statement and this essay will explain my point of view.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of mobile phones should be banned in public places. First, banned mobile phones are believed to equalize community and conditions regardless of their background family. This banned phones support, presumably tends not only to increase the overall consumer rate of lower-income people but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority when shopping, this promotes an egalitarian society. Second, banned mobile phones would result in a higher supply of highly qualified workers. Moreover, people can have true feeling when reading books in libraries or shopping and contact with other people, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that skilled and communication human capital is imperative to foster economic and social development in any nations.
Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once government should be banned phones in certain places. First, banned phones would likely correspond with tremendous many problems strain on a country. For example, when traveling on a bus or go to other country, having a mobile phone can be life-saving. They can call for medical assistance or their family to help. In many situations, mobile phones can make a bad consequences, they want call for help and in some dangerous areas. Therefore, banning mobile phones would deprive individuals of their ability to seek help during emergencies. Second, mobile phones is one of the vital part in these day, there are many technology devices including mobile phones, tablets or computer help people to communicate and keep in touch with their family especially to older people. Example, when people went to the library or coffee shop, it’s is the best place to working so if they banned phones, it’s not useful for many people. Especially, a business profession who travel frequently for work needs to maintain constant communication with their colleagues and clients. A ban on mobile phones would hinder ability to respond to urgency. It, instead, would be a more banned viable option if the resources where focused on gentle or special events such as national conference.
In conclusion, despite of some advantages when banned mobile phones. As a result, it would be more un-convenient and not suitable in this contemporary life. People doing anything with technology devices for talking, studying and working online. From my perspective, government can ban mobile phones in solemn places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
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Message: Did you mean 'it is'?
Suggestion: it is
...ple went to the library or coffee shop, it’s is the best place to working so if they ba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2422.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 453.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34657836645 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79624123694 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527593818985 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 762.3 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4619097602 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.88 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.12 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375713628359 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109298135452 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759589032381 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261562748821 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670291815057 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.