Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this modern era some people believe that their are overwhelming number of options whereas others think that too many offers may lead to difficult situations in this eassy we will examine both side arguments and give my overall opinoin
firstly, increasing number of choices such as internet and globalisization made life easier with communication as well as transport . in addition to this it made products to buy at cheaper rate on the other hand it leads to impluse buying
for example, in few years ago people use see limited channels on see telivision for entertainment while today chanels are selected by own choices like netflix, prime video etc..,
secondly , influence of world wide web there good tranportation became easier however foreign food products then their is unlimited trade of imports and exports are their from country to country for instances, before they used goods to travel through water ships now a days shipping is done on flights makes life better . thirdly students who study all day in library a decade ago while these days using vast wifi to download study materials
last but not least their are people who mislead the choices for disadvantages for example , using social media as a weapon such as instagram , whatsup, facebook looking into one's privacy may intend to jail or else punishment
to sum up all based on these overwhelming choices life became easier and simple moreover it made things as fast as the internet in my opinoin i believe that use choices for good purpose and take decision right way otherwise this may lead put your life in danger
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98501872659 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55158448212 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670411985019 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 89.0 20.2975951904 438% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.903467902 49.4020404114 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 443.666666667 106.682146367 416% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 89.0 20.7667163134 429% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 70.0 7.06120827912 991% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136578425485 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105850851324 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073053539424 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732648280468 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609092625562 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.6 13.0946893788 356% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -18.86 50.2224549098 -38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.0 11.3001002004 336% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.85 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.13 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.6 10.1190380762 372% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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